Editing video feedback and LR
Editing video feedback and LR: TEACHER FEEDBACK: WWW: Good opening shot/enigma Good framing Handheld delusion: docudrama Good title match on action - missed opportunity Good script Good performance Good lighting - academic EBI: HD resolution Add subtitles Shot reverse shot CLASS FEEDBACK: WWW: Camera work Diegetic sound Shots Good actors Good story line Interesting narrative Lighting in the first half Sound design Good cuts Good framing Match on action Mise-en-scene Credit scene Enigma codes/visual EBI: Subtitles Better quality Lighting in some parts Match on action